Such energy and intensity lives in your poem. I'm glad it found me! I love each phrase and your poem gave me a wonderful feeling. I'm saving this to my favorites. Love it!
This is going among my favourites Phil - it is easy to read, flows well and makes the reader feel good.
The imagery is spot on and the poem promises exciting things if we Just " feel our imagination fly".
There is both a great sense of freedom, joy and perfect understanding here in all things and an awareness of the harmony that makes all one.
freeing inspiration, by releasing imagination, this is pure poetry phil,
and the form encapsulates your thoughts with clarity and inspiring
imagery that sets the readers heart in flight, the metaphorical aspect
of ponderings has a psalm quality that is uplifting and liberaring,
you did a great job, this is an excellent read, a true delight,
as to believe is to plant a seed of hope, mirroring the aspect of
destiny, lighthearted, blissful wisdom, leaves one feeling enlightened, mike
I would love to alight upon the nearest star, many a time I have wanted to stand up and have my say , so I can relate to this very well, nice writing and a smooth read.
Your mind soars as freely as a bird, seeking answers ,unraveling mysteries,alighting on stars.I also wish that uncertainty were blown away.The power of imagination is very well represented.Thanks for sharing.
I am a part time photographer and poet when I am not earning my normal crust. I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway.
I love photographing sunris.. more..