giving them the high hat ya dig?

giving them the high hat ya dig?

A Story by Bruce

the crucial illusory tangent, a tangerine slithered savory, past the pugilists duking with dimes, California could be home, but i'd never quit this s**t, the chase of the next five and dime high, estrangement from family, stuttering on the phone to a deserted dialtone all the while wondering could this be it? It couldn't be, I speculated
as
the 
ravens flew on overhead.
I thought of plane engines 
falling from the sky
and CRUSHING me

© 2012 Bruce


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again I'm so grateful for you your reviews, sometimes I get caught up in the moment and make silly errors. I'm so glad you think it's weird! It's just a hodgepodge of paranoiac what if scenarios, although my last one is a fear that my brother has of jet engines falling from overhead.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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weird is a beautiful thing

Posted 12 Years Ago


again I'm so grateful for you your reviews, sometimes I get caught up in the moment and make silly errors. I'm so glad you think it's weird! It's just a hodgepodge of paranoiac what if scenarios, although my last one is a fear that my brother has of jet engines falling from overhead.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ps.. double "the" in the title..

Posted 12 Years Ago


hmm . wild... unpredictable. random.. yet awake.
i like it. it's different. weird. like an asian pear.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Bruce
Bruce

Chicago, IL



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