life

me and my step dad always had a problem with giving chances. he never gave me chances so this poem i wrote out of anger to him

no matter how hard i try

i know that i cant change u

i know that i wont change u

but

i feel that with my words

i can affect u

and what descion u make

stop saying i dont deserve it

i been trying for 3 yrs

and i been fine

mistakes is how people learn

dont hold them agianst me

dont bring the past to the future

believe, trust, and hope

that i can do it right

Reviews

[distefano 401]

that was very...emotion-packed. (sorry, lack of better words) i liked this line.."don't bring the past to the future". people who say we can't do things..they should motivate us, because there's always that feeling you get when you finally succeed, the urge to rub it in i guess, and say "haha i made it!" i enjoyed reading this.