overdose

i had a friend who died and overdosed on oxycone

Dark circles have formed

You can't move a bone

Stuttering becomes a habit

You look like you're stoned

I ask you was wrong

You can't answer me

 

Your head is down

You can't make a sound

Your body keeps twitching

And I keep thinking

Should I tell?

 

I know something's wrong

I know you're not right

Because when I ask you again

Your eyes roll to the back of your head

 

You're no longer that cool and funny kid I know

I'm scared for you

And there's nothing I can do

Because now you're gone

Because you over dosed on oxycone.

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems

Reviews

[Heretic]

I've been here before. Nothing quite as extreme as someone overdosing, but the part "You're no longer that cool and funny kid I know", I've been there.

High School. Seeing friends stoned out of their mind, that's a mind shocker right there.

This is nicely written and it gets your point across. Good use of imagery.

[Lady V]

Wow. I have had firends who have passed from drugs and it hirts worse when you knew what they were doing and did not say anything. I had to live it down but their family seemed to have no clue and I could not understand it. Its hard to cope with a death of anyone but a friends death hurts just as much as family.

Good piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V