Redemption Reigns

Complex Alliterisen

Redemption REIGNS

Desolate dirt and hopelessly hurt,

Luciferian lies fueling crippling cries.

Trenching truth of yesterday's youth,

disguised deceit and constricting conceit.

Plunder pride in steady stride,

secret sin and wickedness, where-in,

Man lives in a world devoid of God. 

The promised place and glorious grace,

with goodness gaining and redemption reigning.

Sovereign shield and hopelessness healed,

prophets paving and salvation saving.

Perfect peace and sorrow's cease,

Forever faithful and grown grateful,

knowing Abba's love will lead us home.

Reviews

[willweb]

Very creative and complicated it seems to me but a beautiful piece of art in the end. Really nice

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you!! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

Oh my goodness, Susan!! where do you find these very challenging forms?? .. my hat is always off to you anyway .. i think you are such a fine poetess and writer.. that being said .. the flow and internal rhyming is so hard hitting yet graceful in V1 ... V2 is literally divine and as a reader, i am grateful for the catharsis and flood of hope .. it resolves V1 for me .. the global social commentary is hard hitting and true .. i luv your poem .. the smooth ride in the form .. and your resolution/solution in closing .. i also appreciate the consonance .. it is "milk tongue" to the reader says i!
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[Susan 🦋]

To answer your question, that would be Richard! He sends me these forms. I think he's trying to kill me lol But, I truly enjoy the challenge, AFTER it's completed. :-) It's a bit of a change for me. This form allowed a more serious expression. The theme may not resonate with some, but that's ok. My beliefs are my own. THIS world is not my home. :-) Thank you for reading!! Very much appreciated.

[Einstein Noodle]

nor mine Princess Susan ...we are just passing through and doing our best to do good and avoid evil ;) i guessed that Richard had something to do with this form .. he is a wonderment .. and most certainly is trying to kill you :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Susan 🦋]

I know! haha but in all honesty, I ask him to send whatever he thinks I'm capable of composing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very strong use of words shared dear Susan. I wanted to know more. You wandered to many places and thoughts. Left, a hopeful ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Susan 🦋]

Strong topic needs some strong wording indeed. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts :-)) Very much appreciated!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well dear Susan. And you are welcome.