The Complex Alliterisen
(unrhymed)
Complex Alliterisen is a seven line per verse poem. But, the pattern for the first six lines must be
such that, when the number of syllables in the first 6 lines are arranged, the odd
number lines have syllables in decreasing order, and the even number lines, have
syllables in decreasing order. And, there must be two alliterations per line.
There are numerous syllable-count formats. Let's use the popular version below.
The odd number lines are as follows:
1st line- 9 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables (same as line 1)
The even number lines are as follows:
2nd line- 11 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
See how they progress in decreasing order.
That's all; but don't forget two 7-line verses make a Complex Alliterisen.
The last line (the seventh line) doesn't need any alliteration in it,
but has to be the same number of syllables as the first line.
My Review
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The form of your poem is exacting but a guiding star that should be studied, then patiently practiced
Your view of life and the rise and fall or humanity is compelling, yet, gently empathetic, Susan. Humankind is very much a mix and un-match: for and to me, you have put that subtly throughout. especially inferred here, ' ..with goodness gaining and redemption reigning.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you Emma for the review 😊
1 Year Ago
You're very welcome. As someone who finds form very hard to follow through, I so admire what you so .. read moreYou're very welcome. As someone who finds form very hard to follow through, I so admire what you so finely do, Susan
This poem seems to be exploring themes of sin, redemption, and faith. The first stanza describes a world that is "desolate" and "hopelessly hurt," where lies and deceit fuel "crippling cries." The second stanza contrasts this with the "promised place" of "glorious grace" and "redemption reigning," where prophets pave the way for salvation and there is "perfect peace" and an end to sorrow. The final line, "knowing Abba's love will lead us home," suggests a belief in a higher power and a sense of comfort and security that comes from that belief. Overall, this poem seems to be grappling with some of life's big questions and the search for meaning and purpose in a world that can often seem dark and difficult. Thank you for sharing it to the world!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you for this incredible and very accurate review!!😊
Oh my goodness, another structure I know nothing about... I love structure and so I probably will try it some day. Trying to learn all the many forms on my plate as I am still quite new to all this.
Thank you for sharing not just your poem but the exact structure to (try) and follow.
Lisa, another beautiful day here in Spain
Posted 1 Year Ago
4 Months Ago
Thank you Lisa for the review! Sorry for late reply... I'm just not here much lately :/
4 Months Ago
No problem .. I too am seldom on here… and after a year of Fan Story I stopped that completely….. read moreNo problem .. I too am seldom on here… and after a year of Fan Story I stopped that completely…
All my best,
Lisa
You are a wealth of form and structure! Inspiration as well. Although the world is as yet not devoid of God, it's getting there. Alliteration happens to be one of my favorite aspects of poetry. I've used it as a form and structure but had never seen a formal poetic form requiring it. Something tells me if I keep reading you I might learn something. Thank you!!!
Thank you Bill for so many reviews! Not devoid yet and hopefully never! Another form you should try... read moreThank you Bill for so many reviews! Not devoid yet and hopefully never! Another form you should try...
1 Year Ago
I just happen to have an idea that is looking for a form to be written in. What is the origin of thi.. read moreI just happen to have an idea that is looking for a form to be written in. What is the origin of this form? Where did you find it?
1 Year Ago
Not sure on the origin ... I can find out. Richard sent it to me.
Wonderful Complex Alliterisen as well as the topic you chose to write it in. There really are just two kinds of people in this world, regardless of the reasons why. Nicely penned. tyfs
I firmly believe that good overcomes even in the end. In this world, we may not always witness it; but I still believe. This is very well written and a very challenging form.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you Linda Marie for stopping by and reviewing! Yes, at first glance I was quite intimidated by.. read moreThank you Linda Marie for stopping by and reviewing! Yes, at first glance I was quite intimidated by this form. Once you understand the restrictions, it does flow nicely. (I also love formatted poetry) Richard sends me these forms. Some (well most) I have never even heard of. He also knows I love a challenge :-) Now, I have to work on a Crown of Sonnets! Haha which, is why I didn't mind teasing him a little with his flirty post. The man has me writing Welsh forms, Trijans, Alliterisens and now a Crown of Sonnets! :-)