Butterflies' Sweet Kiss

Butterflies' Sweet Kiss

A Poem by Susan 🦋
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Sonnet

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'Tis Mother Nature's wondrous gifts bestow ...
exquisitely endowed, quaint butterflies.
Oh, gilded wings, spark meadowlands aglow;
young, carefree spirits dance 'pon crimson skies.

How daydreams welcome Summer's warm embrace,
as rosy cheeks gleam possibilities.
T'ward blissful freedom, young hearts lively chase ...
flop peacefully beneath majestic trees.

Past's yesterdays, true simple joys abound,
whence wee ones' yearnings soared beyond all height.
Now, laugh-some mem'ries; gaieties resound
in gentle waves, insisting ~ reunite!

Perhaps, in hushed, still wand'ring's, reminisce ...
of timeless pleasures ~ butterflies' sweet kiss.

© 2020 Susan 🦋


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This made me reminisce about butterflies. I don't see that many anymore. It's not the butterflies fault it starts as a hungry caterpillar. I like how you use time to make a turn in the Volta. Turn to the past. Then in the couplet our memories get a kiss. Nice!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Love the English Sonnet. Usually, I write first … but I saw this image and it inspired the poem. �.. read more
This is impressive poetry. You.have genuine poetic skill.my new friend!:

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Aw Thank you Frankie!
Such a beautiful old world feel to this poem about one of nature's most magical creatures. I feel very fortunate to have many butterflies visit where I live throughout the year and your poem today reminds me of those peaceful days when one will flutter by and maybe stop for a few minutes and visit. Wonderfully penned Susan

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Good morning!! What a lovely review to start my day :) I have a very whimsical garden (mostly perenn.. read more
willweb

1 Year Ago

Your garden sounds enchanting. I also garden quite a bit and have hummingbirds who return every spri.. read more
Oh, how perfect it is to think of butterflies and their sweet kisses... Awhile back I wrote a poem...Butterfly Kisses...
There is something so special about their gilded wings.
Another amazing poem to read of yours!!
Thank you!!
Lisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa! I always a appreciate a review from you! I'll look for yours...
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I too always appreciate a review from you dear Susan..
Thank you,
Lisa
Love this the imagery was awesome! I collect butterflies! Beautiful poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

2 Years Ago

Thank you again!!
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Another beautiful sonnet, You are very talented. Such a most lovely read and brought back memories to my youth. Wonderful write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

2 Years Ago

Thank you for this boat-load of lovely reviews!
This is just a most lovely read, I love thinking back to my yesterday's

Posted 3 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kayley for reading and for the review! Much appreciated! :-)
Reading this I found myself caught up memories past. Were they not the best of times?
I tried kissing a butterfly once. I accidentally inhaled too heavily and swallowed the poor thing whole.
Have a wonderful day...and don't try kissing any butterflies.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

3 Years Ago

I missed this review!!! I am so sorry! Swallowed whole? YUCK!!!! lol Thanks for reading :-)
beautiful write and graphics,loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

3 Years Ago

Omgoodness! I missed this review!! So sorry! Thank you for reading! :-)
Susan,

You've gifted our hearts and senses such a bountifully beautiful Sonnet to touch and caress our youthfully memorable depths with sweet recall.
Ah, for those innocent days, when a butterfly or lightning bug could hold us mesmerized in joyful play for hours … exquisitely rendered.

Thank you, Fine Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 3 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

3 Years Ago

Sigh, what fun days those were! Thank you for the kind review! As always, very much appreciated :-)

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