Mosaic of Blues

FreeVerse

Ahhh, that I could live

in a daydream's

deepest yearnings' release,

ride bright shooting stars

to where you are,

savoring long-awaited

... embraces.

Oh, how ...

love's joyous tears would well,

bursting forth

in pure crystal streams ...

setting-aglow merging souls,

as Heaven's

blushing deities exclaim!

True hearts ...

bond in embrace

now 'n forevermore;

holding firm your hand in mine;

together, soar far above,

midst softest mosaic of blues.

Till ...

finding there, a solitary star,

two lover's at peace ~ rest.

Twinkling lights abound

between strong arms,

Luna beams warmly tonight ...

with you.

From star-glazed eyes,

lovelight aligned cascades;

for, seldom is known

a heart so true !

Mosaic of blues.

Final farewell ...

now, venturing onward,

relinquishing daydream rendezvous'.

Bestowing visions ...

arousing possibilities,

suddenly ...

my world gleams

brightly clear ~ to a soft

mosaic of blues.

Author's Note

Edits courtesy of Richard W. Jenkins.

Reviews

[Rye]

WOW! This is so beautiful and delightful. Enjoyed this write

[Susan 🦋]

Apologies for such a late reply! Thank you for reading and for your kind review!

[Robert Trakofler]

A daydream of ecstasy is the best dream to have and to read as i just did. What a treat to end my reading day to hear your notes as i float on its wave. Lovely lovely lines Susan may you have many more:)

[Susan 🦋]

Sorry for such a late response!! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind words!

[Pete]

lovely and speaks directly to the soul. i sighed a peaceful, relaxing sigh as i read your beautiful words ... :)

[Susan 🦋]

Sorry for the very late response Pete!!! omgoodness! Thank you kindly for reading! :-)

[Diabolicalbeard]

in pure crystal streams ...
setting-aglow merging souls,
as Heaven's
blushing deities exclaim

Thats deep well done

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you for stopping by and reviewing! Much appreciated :-)

[emmajoy]

'suddenly ... my world gleams - brightly clear ~ to a soft mosaic of blues.' In your hands 'blues' ride high.

Your writing bounds into being with such delicacy, Susan! Phrases set within such elegant presentation, graphics truly beautiful. It's always such a pleasure to visit your cafe corner, to enjoy and learn, to near luxuriate!!! Thank you so much. Fond greetings and all..

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow, your words danced to perfect meaning. Susan, you made the reader believe every word. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. I liked the artwork also.
Coyote

[Susan 🦋]

Aw thank you so much for all these terrific reviews!! I am quite honored and so appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me such kind words.

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Susan,
Such is the wonder of your pen that it, obviously, conspired with your heart and soul to splash its ink across the page in such a way the very essence penetrates our every romantic fibre.
What a gorgeous mosaic flower, color, and font choice you've selected to most effectively display this amazingly emotional, tenderhearted, tug of sheer, blissful feelings ... sighhh!

You have my utmost gratitude, Susan, not because I like you so much (though, I do), but because this is just THAT damned good! ~ Richard : )

PS: You forgot to mention this marvelous Free Verse piece won 1st Place in FanStory's "Feelings" contest against numerous master poetesses and poets … "GREAT WIN, POETESS!"

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you Richard for the lovely review and continued encouragement. :-)

[Chris]

A sweet whimsy of soft and warm day's dreams.

[Susan 🦋]

Good morning Chris :-) Thank you for your thoughts.

[Chris]

Well YOURS brought them! And good morning Susan... hope your day echoes your heart.

[Susan 🦋]

Echoes your heart! Hmmm i like that! :-)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Firstly love the art is it yours ? ....beautiful ... then the poem words escape my humble lips it’s beautiful is all I can utter ThAnkyou so much

[Susan 🦋]

Artwork found on Google..but it is lovely :-) Thank you for this great review!! I do appreciate it! :-)

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ok no worries

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh so nice...some love just transcends the earthly realm.
this also reminds me of a really magical, romantic long distance love i once had...and how we communicated through long letters...she in Poland, me here...always wondering if and when we may be together physically again....the emotional and mental ties were like your "mosaic of blues."

j.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for this lovely review! Where in Ploand? Ive been there several times...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can't remember how to spell it..Wroclaw or something like that...

[Susan 🦋]

yes, i know where that is. very nice

[jacob erin-cilberto]

is it not close to Warsaw?
she is a lovely woman..bio chemist...so so smart...lives in California now I think.