Mosaic of Blues

Mosaic of Blues

A Poem by Susan 🦋
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Ahhh, that I could live
in a daydream's
deepest yearnings' release,
ride bright shooting stars
to where you are,
savoring long-awaited
... embraces.

Oh, how ...

love's joyous tears would well,
bursting forth
in pure crystal streams ...
setting-aglow merging souls,
as Heaven's
blushing deities exclaim!

True hearts ...

bond in embrace
now 'n forevermore;
holding firm your hand in mine;
together, soar far above,
midst softest mosaic of blues.

Till ...

finding there, a solitary star,
two lover's at peace ~ rest.
Twinkling lights abound
between strong arms,
Luna beams warmly tonight ...
with you.

From star-glazed eyes,
lovelight aligned cascades;
for, seldom is known
a heart so true !
Mosaic of blues.

Final farewell ...

now, venturing onward,
relinquishing daydream rendezvous'.
Bestowing visions ...
arousing possibilities,

suddenly ...

my world gleams
brightly clear ~ to a soft
mosaic of blues.

© 2019 Susan 🦋


Author's Note

Susan 🦋
Edits courtesy of Richard W. Jenkins.

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Oh my and now a second one
Yes Richard is perfect in edits!!!
And learning…
Again I love your image and your fabulous poem dear Susan

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

:) thank you Lisa!
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome
In the midst of winter, springtime finds me as I read your poem today. I feel warm sunlight and float on the sweetest scents that surround me. Your pome is beautiful. It always amazes me how people can paint with words and create such beautiful portraits and landscapes. Really nice Susan

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

Oops! Missed your wonderful review!! Thank you Will!😊
Your poem has multiple meanings . . . this could be about a lover who's distant or one that's no longer living . . . mosaic of blue (great art) symbolizes "holding the pieces together" while feeling blue, an image packed with meaning. Such a well-crafted central idea, it drives the rest of your poem strongly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

3 Years Ago

Awww Thank you Margie for yet again a lovely review!
This is wonderful, and daydreams are too. What would life be without them.
There are a few poets on this site that are truly great. You are one of them.
The thing that's so nice about free style is, it doesn't have to be quite so structured. I am not a very structured person, more chaotic, I am.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

OMGoodness! Thank you for such a great review!! I really do appreciate it! This a a rare free verse .. read more
What a lovely read. You grace the page very well in free verse.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

A very rare free verese LOL...Aw Thanks for reading, again.
An amalgamation of delight and lust and power, a most provocative piece, well done, good read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

Thank you kindly! :-)
dear Susan... it seems like a Brahms Lullaby for Lovers.
Perhaps sailing on the Ocean blue where Seagulls dance freely.
You have captured the chimes when the wind blows delicately
where blue petals float endlessly on the melodies of sweet love
touching the heart strings of violins. truly, Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

What a lovely review!!! Thank you kindly for taking the time to read. I do appreciate it :-)
what a lovely read ..so gently romantic to the max .. only in a day dream eh!? but i do recall a time of youth that knew such a thing existed ;) and though the dreaming must come back to earth sooner or later .. i would not trade off the experience for anything ... as rock hard as reality is ... and set against a mosaic of blues is dynamite says i ... i love it! blues born from pain and survival ... the mosaic hints of it .. as your dreamer has only just begun .. good on you for this free verse ;) the one word interludes and pausing breath ... nice read .. glad i did not miss it!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

Ahh you found a rare free verse from me! Loving your thoughts on this..Thank you so much!!
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

as you found a rare sonnet of mine ;))))))))))))))))))
Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

yep and I really like it
Ever so lovely and i could feel a certain sweetness flow out, This is wonderful and ever so beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving me such kind words!
Your heart rings true You are a romantic for sure.there is an innocence about you that i find so sweet. The world is your oyster.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

5 Years Ago

Tate!... ( apologies for such a late reply) I'm reading this review and just smiling... see? :-)))).. read more
Tate Morgan

5 Years Ago

All is well I understand completely

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