My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms As breathing quickens, welcome boyish charms Melt into me and set my soul ablaze Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways
With pleasing sentiments caressing me Awake sensations, begging to be free Release forever empty yesterdays Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways
Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when... My urging's heat persuades you; once again Collapse together under starlit haze Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways
My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways.
Interesting that I came all the way back in your pages and found a poem so similar in subject to th one I just read. Your pen must be pretty hot writing all this urgent heat. Your poetry is special, strong and causes the heart to beat ... not so silently.
This is one of those types of Sonnets I haven't written yet. Looks like the only difference is a aabb rhyme pattern.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
:) I haven’t looked at this one in quite a while! It’s a interesting form…but the again, I lov.. read more:) I haven’t looked at this one in quite a while! It’s a interesting form…but the again, I love all things Sonnet 😊Thanks for reviewing!
Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways
These words,they could drown a soul completely in a world of ecstasy.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
well thank you for taking the time to read and send this wonderful review!!! i do appreciate it!
this given stanza's quite fascinating, & certainly claiming the longings of one's true-need of love:
Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways
very beautifully penned out. short. simple. and well polished with romanticism. nicely inked!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for such a sweet review!! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!