Midnight escape

dream land...

When our dreams are hanging on a star

midnight adventures, they're never far,

Come step outside of reality

travel this midnight, escape with me!

Sail the seas through a billowy mist

and be lured to lands, you can't resist.

See Irish eyes that radiate smiles

a maritime thread throughout the Isles.

There are shooting stars to light your way

everlasting love will surely stay.

While our hands embrace on mountain peaksl

icy crystals melt upon our cheeks!

We gently sway to this midnight dance

erase from mind, our circumstance.

On this myst'ry ride, our worlds collide

and welcome relief's found by your side.

Our eyes enchanted by all we see

dispell the shadows and we are free.

But our midnight dreams they cannot end

When hearts are held in each other's hand.

Stepping back through reality's door

divine intervention, we wish for.

Again to hang dreams upon a star

more midnight adventures, never far!

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Inspiring dreamland adventures skillfully conveyed.
Unfortunately, I have the dreams of a retired CPA.
Doesn't stop me from appreciating your very fine work, however.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) thank you !!!

[Gee]

A sweet read, rhymed well and flowed easily. So well done

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you! :-)

[Gee]

My pleasure

[genocide]

you did a very good job on this poem dear

[Susan 🦋]

Much appreciated. Thank you

[genocide]

yep can you read and review the article selina's father didn't accept me

[William Liston]

Wow, you did a great job on this poem. It had very good imagery and a fine flow throughout. Nice work.

-William Liston

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you so much! :-)

[jusstuf]

You are incredible! This poem has me feeling every poignant aspect of this wonderfully well written of a midnight dream escape from the angst of our life's reality. Dreams are two things, moments of desired freedom to feel great and the second, to take your heart and soar with the man who fulfills your needs.

I cannot wait until midnight to escape into a dream like your!!

Best regards,

Jimmy

[Inject Positivity]

So beautiful!!!

I bet you are a dreamer... I'm feeling like I'm truly in a dream land... The most beautiful part your poems is that they give the reader a real experience of dream, your presentation of words, construction of the poems along with stunning rhyming scheme compliments the creativity... As I walk reading this one I felt the mesmerizing feel of dream land where I'm roaming in my own way with so much freedom... What a beautiful picture you have painted my frnd... Superb...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[iamshadowine]

this is incredible! i love it! keep writing :D