Louis serious? You've got to be joking!

Louis serious? You've got to be joking!

A Chapter by Brooklyn
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In Harry's point of veiw

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“I dreamt of her. I bloody dreamt of her!” I probably shouldn’t have said that out loud, considering I’m sharing a hotel room with Lou. He’ll never let me live it down.

“Yeah, I did too. Worst nightmare ever.” I stare at him wondering how any dream with her face could possibly be a nightmare. Even the one where she rejected me. Oh, wait. That was real life. “Drew scares the crap out of me,” he continues and I realize we’re talking about different people.

“Ari, Louis, I dreamt of Ari.”

“Ohhh…” he smiles wickedly and marches out the door and into the hallway. I should have just let him think that it was Drew. “Ari and Harry siting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!” he sings as loud as he possibly can.

“Thanks, Boo Bear. I appreciate it.” I say sarcastically.  “She’s staying in the same hotel as us, you realize that right?”

He stares at me for a long moment, studying me. He knew me really well by know and so he could see something is up. “You really like her, don’t you? I mean really like her.”

“I don’t know,” I sigh. “I just saw her yesterday and I haven’t been able to get her out of my mind since. I even dreamed about her.”

“Get out, get out, get out of my mind. And come into my life.” He sings.

“Seriously, dude.” Louis puts on a strait face so I continue. “The worst part it that I can never have her. She has a boyfriend and I’ll never see her again.”

“Oh.”

“And I can’t get her out of my mind. I need help, Louis.”

“Get out, get out, get out of my head and fall into my arms instead.” I can’t believe I didn’t see that coming. I glare at him and he stops singing. “If it makes you feel any better, I’ve always thought you needed help, Harry.”

I growl escapes my throat. Usually I love the guy. But right now I was too unsure of what’s going on. I mean, why is my heart hammering so fast when I think of her? It only does that during horror movies.

“Okay, I’ll help you find her"I mean it can’t be that hard, right? "After I tell the boys that our little Haz has fallen in love.”

“Really, Lou?” Is that necessary?” I say. Moaning with embarrassment as I picture their reactions.

“Yes, Harry, it is.” Still in his boxers, Louis runs into Zayn’s room across the hall. Than all I hear is Zayn saying, “WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!” and I run out of the hotel room, trying to get to Niall and Liam’s before they do.

I block it and grab the doorway so that there is no possible way they could enter. Except for, well, barging through me. Which is what they do.

“Nooo!” I howl. Lou wakes them up and I tackle him to the ground.

“Let me up!” He mumbles into the carpet.

“Never!” But there is one little flaw in this plan. Zayn knows too.

There is absolute silence for a moment after the words leave his mouth. Then Niall starts laughing so hard he rolls of his bed.  Liam looks like he’s waiting for the “just kidding”. It doesn’t come.

“I never thought I’d see the day when Harry Styles fell in love. With just one girl anyway.” He says with a smirk.

“Shuddup.” I say still on Louis’s back. I fell the heat rise to my face. “I can’t be in love with her, I just met her.”

“Okay, you just dreamt of her.” Louis compromises. The rest of the boys let out a chorus of “ooooooooooo”s  “Can you let me up now?” Louis asks.

“Do you not understand the meaning of ‘never’, Louis?” I say without moving.

“Let me see…” He pretends to think for a moment. “Nope. Not in my internal dictionary. But I did find a saying that goes something like ‘never say never.’”

“I thought that was a Justin Beiber song!” Niall cries incredulously.

“That too, Niall.” Liam consoles him.

“The question is, boys: how are we gonna reunite our Haza with his one true love?” Louis says, directing the conversation away from JBiebs.

“We could snap our fingers and make her magically appear.” Zayn suggests sarcastically.

“If only.” Lou grumbles, realizing that this was gonna take more work than he originally thought.

“We could Google her.” Niall says, reaching for his stash of crisps. The bag opens with a pop! and soon he is crunching away on potatoy goodness. We all stare at him and eventually he feels our gaze and turns to us. “What? You guys are all looking at me as if you just realized that I’m a genius.”

“It’s not that Niall. We all just realized that you had something going on in that head of yours other than ‘FOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!’” I tease. He throws a pillow at me and it hits me square in the face. “Hey! Watch it mate!”

By this point Liam has already turned on his laptop and is merrily searching the web. “Arianna…” he says as he types it into the search bar. “What’s her last name?”

“Jackson.” I tell him as I move to see the screen. This requires me getting off Louis so he breathes a sigh of relief and mumbles something like ”at least you don’t have a boney butt.” I wonder how Liam could have possibly forgotten her last name.

There are a lot more Arianna Jacksons in the United States than you’d think. Its’ a pretty rare name, but we found eight. And those eight all had multiple social media accounts and were all in newspapers and everything else that could possibly be online.

Mean while, Louis goes into another round of “Ari and Harry sitting in a tree” and Niall exclaims “Your names rhyme!”

“Found her.” Liam finally announces. He shows me the computer for confirmation. “Yep, that’s her.” I agree. My heart starts thumping so loud that I’m pretty sure the whole band could hear it. 

It’s a Facebook page and we search it for any clues on where she live or an email address or a phone number. Nothing. But there is one last hope. We search her friends and find Drew’s page. And on it is Drew’s phone number.

“No.” Louis flat-out refuses. “We are not calling her. The shock will probably kill her.”

“C’mon, Lou.” I beg. “Please?”

He growls and then “fine.” We hand the phone to him. “Wait! Why me?”

“Maybe cause you’re the one she was squeezing the breath out of while bowling her eyes out. I think she’d be more open to giving out her friends information to you.” Zayn reasons.

“Fine.” Lou sighs. “You better really love this girl.”

 “Thanks, Boo Bear.”

He dials the number, takes a deep breath, and answers, “Hello. This is Louis from One Direction.” Then he waits out the screams


© 2012 Brooklyn


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Hi Brooklyn,
Good writing, Keep it up
Regards
Shawlyn

Posted 12 Years Ago


Compared with Sophie's story, Harry and Louis seem quite different. I guess its just point of view.
Nice job though:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


luv2dream

12 Years Ago

I know right! I'm reading both! They are both ultra funny stories though!
Odayin

12 Years Ago

It would be kinda crazy if the boys actually did end up reading this..
I can't wait for the next chapter now. This is really good but I noticed the same thing that Sophie did so just fix that and you should be good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


AHAHAHA! So I noticed a few grammar issues. Like you have problems with your quotes, like missing periods/commas at the end of what someone is saying or double quotes like this: “Really, Lou?” Is that necessary?” and at one point you said "its' " but that's just a typo.
also, Hazza is spelled with two z's :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ha! The last line made me laugh, because I can imagine that perfectly in my head.
I think in one place you spelled Niall "Nile", and the last line is a different font size. There are a few grammar mistakes, but other than that, good job. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome! There are a few grammar mistakes, but other than that I really enjoyed. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This really good! Keep Writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Good job! Awesome writing. . .

Posted 12 Years Ago



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