But Not

Alive but not living hoping but not praying smiling without feeling talking without saying wanting without need needing without knowledge  hurting without caring caring but not love searching without believing searching for what's enough crying without tears fear without fears offense without slight lights dim, but darkness bright truth without true finished but not through been without being sight but not seeing somebody save me somebody free me somebody know me somebody believe in me

Reviews

[Mirabella]

Wow. This is so touching :)
This feeling of meaninglessness is something we all experience now and again. The way you expressed it through this poem is beautiful: the word choice, repetition, simplicity...
xx

[Pencrafter]

Very interesting. The truth is in the endeavor. It makes me tired to read this, as though I had been physically exerting myself. Mental exercise! Good job.

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Reallly great job!! :)

[afra]

wow amazing work

[Kadessa (Kaddy)]

Beautiful write
lots of pain, confusion, and lost emotions in this poem
Beautiful as always

[JiDonnelly]

Emm wow, OK.
This is amazing, Different, but amazing, I really admire the work you have here.
Unique and powerful, Beautiful very beautiful.
I believe in you most sincerely.

-JiDonnelly'

[Sophie]

on a scale of 1 to 10 i swear this is a 200, like, I'm not even kidding. This is amazing. I can't even- just.
asdfghjkl.

[Amanda]

I SECOND THAT

[Sophie]

right?

[Brooklyn]

thanks guys, but it's not that good...

[Amanda]

Brooklyn dint make me slap you :P

[Sophie]

I SECOND THAT

[Brooklyn]

lol... but it's not

[Sophie]

SHUT UP AND TAKE COMPLIMENT!
*insert heart here because WC is stupid and won't put them in*read moreSHUT UP AND TAKE COMPLIMENT!
*insert heart here because WC is stupid and won't put them in*
luv you :P

[Amanda]

I WUV YOU MORE BROOKLYN

[Brooklyn]

i love both of you guys! but its not that good and i reuse to take compliments period.

[Amanda]

Hooo boy we gonna have ourselves a doozy if you don't

[Brooklyn]

?

[Amanda]

Long story XD i was instructed to say this more often

[Brooklyn]

alrighty then... they really should let people put in hearts. its not even fair.

[Amanda]

[Amanda]

I less than three you guys

[Sophie]

< 3

[Amanda]

Cheater

[Brooklyn]

:P hey it works.

[Amanda]

Reminds me if Invisible, nice job Brooklyn :)
I can relate right now

[Brooklyn]

love that song :)

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful job, girl!