Waiting

Waiting

A Chapter by Brooklyn
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remember when i said that the last chapter was the world's shortest chapter? I was wrong. This one is. Oh yeah, and it's Harry's P.O.V.

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There is no call.

He said She’d be home soon.

I can’t just sit here and do nothing.



© 2012 Brooklyn


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This writing would make a great stand-alone poem. It says so much in three concise lines.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Adding a little shortness is a great way to spice it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


okay, I know that you're all frustrated by the shortness of the chapter, but it is short for a reason. I get it, I'd be annoyed as all get out if someone did this to me. But keep reading. You'll see in the next chapter why this one is so short. And if you don't understand it after reading that chapter, message me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Everyone knows there is more to this chapter. Please think about editing it and adding the depth that we know you can do. I mean like what is Louis telling him? Is Niall raiding the mini bar at their hotel? I mean like what is going on?

Posted 12 Years Ago


You you should write more. people want to read more than thus.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brooklyn

12 Years Ago

it is short for a reason people! Don't worry I'm working on the next one
Sophie

12 Years Ago

Eh heh, a likely story.
I believe you're correct in saying this is the shortest chapter. C'mon man, write! I know you can!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dude, you can write more to this chapter you know...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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