The Aching That Never Leaves

The Aching That Never Leaves

A Poem by ~Brooke Moran~

I feel so underneath the world.
My skin aches for a presence.
Something I can hold on to, something I can call "mine".
There is a small voice inside that becomes loud and screams of agony.
No person seems to notice. 
The voice never escapes from my soft lips that I constantly press together.
All alone, in a room no one enters.
That is where you will find me, silently sobbing.
But I will manage to smile. 
That is what I do best. 

© 2013 ~Brooke Moran~


Author's Note

~Brooke Moran~
I decided to pick up writing again. It's been awhile. 3 years to be exact. So if this is bad, sorry. Please give me your honest opinion.

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sad, lonely, depressing, so emotional... I love it *tear*

Posted 11 Years Ago


Much nicer flow to this one, there is obvious love and thought behind the writing, and loneliness, mostly this makes me want to hug you, which means it obviously affected me, very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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~Brooke Moran~
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