Dear brown eyes

Short poem but oh well :)

My dear brown eyes,
How i cant see you,
But it does hurt when we say goodbye,
But you cant help it either,

Wishing for you to hold me in your arms,
Making my heart beat fast,
Where its setting off my hearts alarm,
I cant even calm down after messaging you,

Dear brown eyes i do like you,
No matter what,
If i try to stop my mind doesnt want to,
I dont know if this means im crazy but i like you brown eyes.

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

Short and cute, I felt the same way about my last girlfriend, except she had hazel eyes. I loved this poem because reading it gave me a wave of nostalgia, thinking of my ex...

[yuki]

Thank you for reviewing :) and wouldve done that but i was listen to a song that made me write this :D

[Ryan Henderson]

cool :D

[Don]

This is so cute❤ i like it 😍 haha

[yuki]

Thanks jazz :) its meant to be cute :)

[Malister Mikey]

I liked it short but cute and a pretty fun read good job

[yuki]

Thank you :) and exactly what i was going for :D

[Malister Mikey]

I'm happy I hit the nail on the head then lol.

[yuki]

Haha yep yep :)