i wish i could wake up with amnesia

i wish i could wake up with amnesia

A Poem by yuki

I wish I could forget my memory,

I could start anew,

Even if its temporary,

It would be better for me,

Even if I miss everything,

I want to be in a better place,

Even if I forget how to sing,

And even if I forget who I am,

If I leave everything behind,

I feel like I wouldn't care,

Even if I lose my happy memories in my mind,

There are some things I would keep,

If I could wake up with amnesia,

I would be happy all over again,

Even if I didn't believe ya,

At least you'd have memories of me with you,

And every wish I made,

Everything I dreamed,

Everything would fade,

But I would always be with you,

Even if this is just a dream,

I want it to be real for at least just a day,

Even if things aren't what they seem,

I would be happy to wake up with amnesia.

© 2014 yuki


Author's Note

yuki
got it from this song even if I don't care for them I really like this song, you would have to listen to the song to understand this.

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This is fabulous, Yuki. I too wish I could wake up with amnesia...

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

Thank you glad you liked it :) and i think everyone has those days
yuki this was fabulous...i loved it..:))

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

Thank you anne :)
I have listened to this song and I liked it. I really like your poem:) It is relate able. Sometimes we want to forget certain things. It would be pretty cool if we can select what we want to keep and what we don't.

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

If only it were possible. Thank you for the review :)
This had to be your best ever yuki, congratulations!

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

I agree thank you :)
Really GREAT POETRY!!..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) i love this piece
hityo741

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :).....
I really loved this poem, because I did have amnesia for a day and in truth it was the most peaceful thing to ever experience to forget all those things that make you worry and scared. I forgot everyone, everything all I knew was my older brothers name, though sadly the effect of it still today makes me not have all my memories that I once cherished, though the bliss of knowing nothing is a taste very few get and I am happy I did. Sorry for ranting lol. Good Job Yuki this is one of my favorite works of yours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


yuki

10 Years Ago

No worries its actually pretty interesting to hear that this happened to you. Thank you for the revi.. read more
Malister Mikey

10 Years Ago

You did a very good job on this one you're getting better and thats saying something since you were .. read more
yuki

10 Years Ago

Haha i think i needed lots of improvements to begin with but i know im doing better cause i can see .. read more

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