love date

I just got bored at a 70th birthday party so I wrote this while seeing all the couples there :D

just looking up at the stars,

and laying on the hood of your car,

its a perfect date,

even if it gets really late,

we will keep watching the stars and the moon with the music blasting,

the night is slow and forever lasting,

I want to stay with you,

always being under the moonlight too,

on what seems forever on a wait,

a love date.

Reviews

[Malister Mikey]

You did a fantastic job on this poem what can I say I'm a sucker for anything involving love.

[yuki]

thank you and yea ''love'' is my main good topic even if im young :P

[Malister Mikey]

Love knows no true age young or not I have a feeling you unlike many others know what true love is.

[yuki]

maybe but im not even sure so much but thank you

[Malister Mikey]

Love is an eternity of two souls that connect wether it be family or friend

[yuki]

love knows no limit and theres no bonds between the two then its love otherwise its just a crush

[Malister Mikey]

Couldn't of said it any better myself

[anne]

so sweet and lovely write...:)

[yuki]

thank you anne :)

[Matching Socks]

This is adorable yuki! :)
Love it.

[yuki]

thank you ana for your time reading this :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :-)

[Ti]

Just too cute for words yuki :)
Keep up the good work! :p

[yuki]

thank you summer!! :D you too! :D

[Ti]

Haha, thank you and your welcome ;)

[Tessa Rudolph]

I like this poem; the rhyme scheme is cool and very traditional, and you tell the story and capture the feelings very well.

[yuki]

thank you so much :)