clouds and promises

my mind has been in the sky,

its there as the days go by,

happy and smiling all day ,

thinking if all luck came my way,

my heart pumping with joy that can't be broken,

a smile at night to when im woken,

i go outside at night,

to see the beautiful moon light,

promises may be broken and some may last,

for me keeping a promise is a well known task,

so even if my heads in the skies,

a promise i make is mine,

i love to think about the clouds and the promise i keep,

even something that has a small meaing its still deep,

so i may be in the skies,

but i will keep a promise thats mine.

Reviews

[Emily]

I love how you started it! It had me to the end!

[yuki]

thank you glad you liked it :)

[Matching Socks]

Very sweet writing yuki. :)
Lovely little poem. :)

[yuki]

thank you ana :)

[little thoughts]

very true and a very good quality is described

[yuki]

thank you so much for the review :)

[anne]

so sweetly written....beautiful message and the lines.....
So i may be in the skies
but i will keep a promise thats mine.......tugged at my heart.....very nicely penned dear.. :)

[yuki]

glad you like it thank you :)

[anne]

Anytime my dear..... :)

[Jackson H. Harley]

Love it, such a great message :)

[yuki]

thank you :)