dancing under the moonlight

im with you

another endless night

doing anything we want to

including dancing under the moonlight

just dancing under the stars

a night i wont forget

with no passing cars

our minds are set

two people dancing under the lamps

who enjoy it

together we just hold hands and dance

while the lamps are still lit

it feels like a long time

but its worth it tonight

but tonight your mine

with me and you dancing together under the moonlight

 

 

Reviews

[jennifer little]

this was an amazing poem i loved how you put the details in it .. great job keep up the good work

[yuki]

Thank you for the review :) i will to :)

[Ryan Henderson]

Very good poem, Yuki! I wish you he best of luck in the love poems contest!

[yuki]

Thank you so much!

[Moon]

The light from the moon is absolutely tranquil. Dancing in the moon light is blissful and is something differently worth doing every once in a while. Well done.

[yuki]

the moons always pretty in my eyes and thank you for the review :)

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Wandering Minstrel]

So vividly told. So detailed, this vibrant message! You have taken a dream to it highest power. This is a mind-expanding piece

[yuki]

thank you I have a wide imagination :)

[anne]

very creative,innocent ......loved reading it.....

[yuki]

im glad you love reading it thank you

[Sandman91]

This is awesome ^^ very creative, sounds like something I would of read in English class back in high school. Keep it up :)

[yuki]

thank you for the review :)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
..]

Something tells me that they are dancing in the middle of a road...is it just me? anyway,It reminds me of the story I wrote when I was in grade 7.I didn't like how it went so I threw it out

[yuki]

haha i gave it that impression yes :P

[joshua deathdealer]

I agree. This is quite nice. Well done.

[yuki]

thank you kindly :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

For a young lady this is a beautiful poem. Welcome Yuki to the land of ideas, concepts and beauty.

[yuki]

haha thank you