The Player's VictoryA Story by Brooke I walk into my precinct and the familiar environment
sends waves of annoyance through my head. Captain Martinez paces in his office
and the usual duty officers are sipping at their usual coffee. I scratch my
head, wondering why I decided to become a detective. I thought this job would
be a challenge, having to solve the puzzles of murders. However, every serial
killer wannabe case I have had to deal with has left so many stupid clues, as
if they wanted me to find them. I take a seat in my familiar black chair and
get back to my familiar and boring job. I
see my partner, Anne, sit up from her desk and walk towards me. Her hazel eyes
are narrowed and her fists are clenched. Anne always has the same expression
every time a murder takes place. “David, a homicide in a woman’s home just got
called in,” Anne says to me while checking her phone. “Let’s go, I’ll explain
on the way.” Anne grabs the keys to our black Impala and we walk out of the
precinct. Anne
mutters more information about the murder as we enter the car, but I tune her
out. I think of past killers, such as Dahmer and Ridgeway, and wish I could
have worked on their case. That kind of excitement must have kept detectives on
their toes, waiting for the killer to strike again. “David?
Hello, are you listening?” Anne asks while snapping her bony fingers in my
face. “Are you alright today? You seem distracted.” I shrug my shoulders and
look out the tinted window of the car. Joggers pass by, green lights to turn to
yellow, and then to red, distant sounds of dogs barking ring in my ears. The
same sounds, the same sights I’m forced to see every day. The car comes to a
halt as Anne parks behind the other cars of officers from our precinct. She
opens her door, and begins walking up the victim’s driveway. A sly grin spreads
across my face as I, too, exit the car. I
hold up the yellow police tape as Anne ducks under it, and the gruesome scene
grasps my attention like sunshine after a cloudy day. Blood. Blood
covers the once white carpet, blood is smeared on the walls, and a blood trail
leads up the wooden staircase. Numerous bullet holes tattoo the walls. My heart
speeds up to a rapid pace as I make my way up the bloodied stairs. I cannot
tear my eyes away from the disgusting scene. Millions of thoughts run through
my head as I enter the room where the victim’s body lies. Her blond hair is a
tangled mess, her blue jeans are ripped, and her purple blouse is now stained
red. On the wall is a message, written in blood: “Try,” is written repeatedly
over and over. I
take a step forward and feel something under my shoe. I lift my foot, look down,
and see a lipstick container. I pick it up and turn it over in my hands. Anne
steps in the room as I grip the little black container. A
speechless Anne steps around the victim’s body to see the woman’s face. Her
short brown hair falls in her face as she bends down to inspect the woman’s
face. I begin to take in the sight of the victim’s pale face. It looks as if a
chunk of her blond hair has been cut off. “What
are your thoughts on the walls?” Anne asks, shifting her hazel eyes to me. I
put the lipstick container in my pocket and say, “Maybe they are challenging us
to try to solve the case, or try to discover their identity.” Anne nods her
head in agreement. “Let’s try to see if the killer left anything behind. Be
sure to get pictures of the wall.” Anne
and I begin our search for clues, scanning the room for fingerprints and any
possible evidence that could lead us to our killer. After
searching the room, Anne says, “This place has been wiped clean. This person
knew what they were doing.” I can hear the frustration in her voice. She begins
taking pictures of the body and wall while I search the rest of the house. I open another door
that leads to a bedroom. The large bed has a purple comforter draped over it. A
tall dresser stands against the wall on the left side of the room, and the bedside
table is askew. As I search it I notice a piece of tattered cloth stuck to the
corner. I pull a Ziploc bag and tweezers from my pocket and stow the torn piece
of cloth away. After searching the
rest of the house Anne and I decide to go to the forensics lab to test our few
findings. I become excited at the reality that few clues were found, I say to
myself, “Let the games begin.” *** A month has passed and
three more bodies have been called in. However, each message is different. The
first victim, Hannah Smith, “Try;” the second, Cooper Gilbert, “To;” the third,
Rachel Hobgood, “Catch;” and the fourth, Gabriella Ruotolo, “Me.” And, each
victim seemed to have a section of their hair cut. Captain Martinez calls
in a meeting. I look at the worried faces of the surrounding officers and I
quietly laugh to myself. I find a seat and wait for the Captain to begin the
meeting. “How is it that after a
month of this killer committing these murders we have no leads?” The Captain’s
frustrated expression causes an unsettling silence in the room. A cough
reverberates off the walls. I look at each face in this room, each with the
same expression: guilt. “Cap, we’re doing the
best we can. This killer has done their research and knows how to cover their
tracks,” I say while leaning on my elbow. “Everybody, start doing
your job and let’s get this killer put behind bars. David go find Anne, another
body was just called in, go see what you can find,” The Captain says, slamming
the door shut behind him. I look around the room and notice for the first time that
Anne is not there. I try calling her cell phone. No answer. I lightly tap my
chin with my finger and decide to look at the body without Anne. I
notice the sun going down and darkness starting to creep in as I make my way through
the victim’s backyard. His neighbors found his body lying on the ground next to
the white picket fence. I look around the yard to see if there is a message. I
wonder if this is the same killer, with the lack of a message. I take one more
look around the yard, then approach the victim. His blond hair, missing a
chunk, matches the MO of the other victims. I begin taking pictures of the
scene. I put the camera down
and reexamine the body. He lays face down, lacking a shirt. His legs stick out
at an awkward angle. I turn him over on his back and my eyes widen. Carved into
his torso is a message. It reads: “Boo.” *** I
throw my phone to the floor of my car after it tells me no battery is left. I
need to tell David my new findings on the case. His house is only a couple of minutes
away, so I decide to see if he is there. I
step out of my car and walk up the brick steps to David’s apartment. The way
the weeping willows with their long, flowing branches surround the house sends
chills through my body. The setting sun causes an unsettling feeling in my
stomach as darkness begins to spread across the yard. I shake my head and laugh at myself for
feeling this way and knock on the door. I waited a few moments and did not hear
any stirring in the house. I try the door knob and twist it to reveal an
unlocked door. “David?
David, are you here? I found some fingerprints at Gabriella Ruotolo’s crime
scene.” I walk into his kitchen and see it is completely spotless, how his
house usually is. I walk down the creaking hardwood steps into his basement.
Half way down my foot hits a sharp object and I topple down the stairs. I curse
at the stairs as I pick myself up off the floor. I walk back up the stairs to
investigate what tripped me. It’s a small handle embedded into the stair. I try
turning the rusted knob clockwise, and to my surprise the single stair slightly
lifted. I pull up the stair and a small box is lying inside. A smile is on my
face as I realize this is a secret compartment. Pentagrams are carved into the
wooden box. My brows furrow in confusion. I slowly lift open the lid of the box
and a shiny key that looks like it could be from medieval times is what I find.
I turn it over in my hands, wondering what it opens. “D-David?
Are you down here?” Nothing but the sound of my echoes bounces off the walls. I
get up and dust off my knees and make my way back up the stairs, taking the key
with me. Before leaving I decide to take a look upstairs. Maybe he is sleeping.
More creaking steps sound with each step I take. Never having been upstairs, I
decide to check the first door on the right. The door does not budge. I notice
a strange looking lock on the door. A tiny pentagram is etched underneath the
key hole. I lift the key to the lock, and I suddenly hear a soft click. My heart
begins to flutter as I open the door. I feel sweat prickling at my forehead. A
sinking feeling in my stomach causes me to feel nauseous. As the door swings
open all I see is a dark room. I blindly feel for a light switch on the wall,
and my fingers finally wrap around the switch. What I see is worse than I could
have imagined. Blood smears cover the walls, sharp tools lie across the floor,
and five different shades of blond hair are framed on the walls, each with a
name and date underneath. Hannah Smith 7/6/2013. Cooper Gilbert 7/13/2013.
Rachel Hobgood 7/20/2013. Gabriella Ruotolo 7/27/2013. Marcus Trolli 8/3/2013.
There is also a lipstick case on the little desk directly under Hannah Smith’s
frame. The key in my hand
drops to the ground, interrupting the silence. A gasp escapes my lips as the piercing
sound rings in my ear. I cover my mouth with my hand to try and stop the tears
I know are coming. Millions of thoughts and questions run through my mind. My
shaking hand reaches in the back pocket of my jeans to retrieve my phone. I
curse out loud and kick the air as I remember my phone is lying in my car with
no battery remaining. After another moment I pick up the key from the floor,
turn off the lights in the room and shut the door closed. I practically sprint
out the door of David’s house. I fumble for my car keys in the pocket. My
breathing is at a rapid pace I cannot control. I turn the key in the ignition,
turn on the police siren in my car, and make my way to the precinct. *** After finishing up at
the crime scene, I head back to my car. I begin to open my car door, but I
begin to hear several police sirens traveling near me. “There is no way they
have figured it out yet,” I say to myself. I look into the distance hoping the
sirens are not awaiting me. Sadly, multiple police cars turn the corner on the
street I am on and now my game has been foiled. The officers jump out of the
cars, yelling at me to get on the ground, and a smile spreads across my face. I
say, “It’s been fun, boys.” They pin me to the ground, handcuff me and put me
in the backseat of the squad car. “David, why?” I look up
and see a disappointed look on Officer Dean’s face. I only remember meeting him
a couple times since he was new on the force. “I hate it when my puzzle pieces ask
questions.” *** Jail is my new life. I
live in this cage that is supposed to “fix me,” but there is nothing that needs
fixing. Although my precinct does not believe me, I am a completely sane man. I
knew what I was doing. I know it is bad to hurt people. But that life I lived
felt like death to me. What do you have to lose when you are dead? The answer
is nothing. My precinct should thank me. I actually made their boring lives
interesting. I gave them a game to play, and how do they repay me? They throw
me in jail. I guess I cannot blame them. It is what officers do. They put the
“bad guys” away to prevent more harm from happening. Psychologists always
ask me why I did it. They tell me how great a detective I was, and how I threw
it away. I always give them the same response: “My puzzle pieces defeated me at
my own game, and now I must pay the price.” I do feel some
resentment towards Anne since she entered my house without permission and
foiled my game, but she also found my fingerprints on Gabriella Ruotolo’s body,
so my game was over by then. I wish I could have seen her face as she saw my
trophy chamber. She sometimes comes to my cell to talk to me, asks me to explain
myself. She looks at me with hatred, and I do not blame her. I know she will
never forgive me, but forgiveness is not what I want. What I want is a new game
for the officers to play. A few days ago I whispered a sentence to her, and she
has not visited me since. “Wait for my escape and a new game will appear,” I
said. © 2014 Brooke |
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Added on February 26, 2014 Last Updated on March 7, 2014 |