Beautiful eyes

Beautiful eyes,

So pretty and sad,

Filled with blue oceans,

In my shirt soaken.

Beautiful eyes,

Cried all day,

Eyes of mine,

why are you so blind?

Beautiful eyes,

Who hurt you so bad?

Mirrors, mirror

Just can see me.

Beautiful eyes, 

Go sleep all night,

maybe in the morning,

you've cired all out.

Author's Note

its short but how is your opinion on this?

Reviews

[Franky]

In the very last line, I think you mean 'cried' not cired

Am I right?

I do think this is your best. It's interesting and unique. Well thought out.

[Shoshana]

Beautiful wow :)) i love it

[John the Baptist]

A very evocative effort here, but please define ''mirrow.''

[brokenwriter]

oh s**t I mean mirror XD sorry I am not good at english language

[John the Baptist]

Your English is considerably better than my German.

[brokenwriter]

haha thanks :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting..depicts the situation when one person just needs the shoulder to cry on...that person can see nothing else but the pain...and needs to let it all out...and we have to understand..