Running Swirls

Running Swirls

A Poem by thebrokenwillow

 

Flying through the molecules

Tightening muscles, falling feet

Parted lips, escaping emotions

Too fast to catch the scent

Of the moist ground.

Soothing rise and fall

Of  the flesh under the point

Vibrating with life force.

Wet streaming down

Pink tinted, freckled

Cheeks, a flurry

Of endless motion

Trying to outrun

Reality.

© 2008 thebrokenwillow


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This is really neat.
My favorite part is:
"Cheeks, a flurry
Of endless motion
Trying to outrun
Reality."
Great work!
-E.M.R

Posted 15 Years Ago


excellent, darling.

i love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Have you been running in the rain again? I swear your gonna get a cold.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2008

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