Dance

Dance

A Poem by thebrokenwillow

 

Stripe

Dot

Swirl

The colors play, the bodies glide.

Flutter

Click

Sigh

Love spreads, peace develops.

© 2008 thebrokenwillow


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Might be an idea to rearrrange the sentence structure of the two lines sticking out. For example; peace develops would be a beautiful line on its own, following after Love spreads. Just another thought, if you're portraying a specific dance or dance in general. A couple of suggestions. :]
Short but sweet. Neat!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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thebrokenwillow
thebrokenwillow

Bangor, ME



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My name is Kay and I�m just your average teenager fighting for her identity. I can�t tell you how hard that is, living with four other siblings, but I guess you can imagine. I .. more..

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