Ya, thats it.

Ya, thats it.

A Poem by thebrokenwillow
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a poem about love

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It's a weakness you willingly reveal.

It's a hope you put on the line.

It's the sun after a month of rain.

It's the first flower in your garden.

It's the movie and the good cry.

It's the hole you willingly make in yourself.

It's watching the snow melt.

It's opening the shades in the morning.

It's a pillow after your longest day.

Ya, thats it.

 

© 2008 thebrokenwillow


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I really love the first line of this poem. And also how you give it your character in the 'Ya, that's it'. I found it very charming. Love comes in many forms. Good write. NH

Posted 16 Years Ago


I know what you mean. Nice

Posted 16 Years Ago



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