The act of heartbreak.

lights off;
world spinning;
heart beating;
tears falling;
who am i?;
what have i become?;
you hurt me;
heart splattered;
blood shot eyes;
whats love?;
is it real?;
when all the anger;
that fills me;
crashes in waves;
of how you lied;
the act you put on;
almost made me;
believe it was true;
but somehow i knew;
from the look in your eyes;
how you couldnt look at me;
that you never told me;
what was on your mind;
but now i know;
it was written like a play;
that the love you portrayed;
was just a made up fairytale;
of a happily ever after;
and now i know;
that nothings lasts forever;
to never get my hopes up;
and because of you;
no one will ever know;
how my love is like;
and because of you;
im hidden in the dark;
and put my emotions in a cell;
locked away until one day;
i get the courage to reveal them;
so thank you;
for tearing me apart;
and filling me with angst;
and showing me that;
you never know when the jokes on you;
you put on a good routine;
and now the curtain finally closes;
with me left alone;
in this dark depths of thought;
sweating with adrenaline;
tears pouring down on my sheets;
and my heart broken without repair;
as the curtain closes;
the only audience that is there;
is you not even bothering to say sorry;
and you walk out without a last goodbye;
instead of clapping for the act you put on;
it is only the sound of your shoes walking;
now i am not in an act of love;
but now in a world of misery;

Reviews

[Jake Martin]

wow.. really great.
really touching. very vivid imagery, and interesting style.
love it.

[BeautifulDisaster]

oh wow. that is definitely detailed.
i like the imagery involved in it.
i love it good job. :)