Love Intentions

Love Intentions

A Poem by lexiilunatic

Notice me....

 

How I dress just to get your attention,

How I walk right by you,

 

Notice me....

 

How our eyes connect without expectation,

How we never blink when our start connects.

 

Notice me...

 

How I smile when I feel your stare,

How I try to nochalantly look at you,

 

Notice me....

 

I finally get the courage to say Hi to you,

You say "I was waiting for you to notice me."

"I was hoping the same thing."

© 2008 lexiilunatic


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Very nice. :)
I like how the end is not exactly what you expect.
Great read, fabulous write, wanna read more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Aw... this is cute lol. Always enjoy reading pieces like this. Very entertaining. I really loved the end. I thought it be the same old, "who-are-you-heartbreak". Thanks for a nice read! :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


Aww. This is so sweet.
I really love this.
Excellent story line.
Such a wonderful write.
-Elissa :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


im sooo jealous. lol. you are soooooo good at writing. :]

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 26, 2008

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Hello there. My name is lexii. You can call me lexii lunatic. Im 15 years old, and i have many talents. One of them i think is writing. But thats my personal opinion. I am not a normal person i must .. more..

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