My Broken Heart is broken again.

My Broken Heart is broken again.

A Poem by lexiilunatic

i leave scars on my wrist but you leave scars on my heart,
everything crumbles and i fall apart,
i am consumed in your little white lie,
the lie grows bigger that it touches the sky,
i bite my lip so hard that is starts to bleed,
how could you make me feel like i was what you did need,
you made me into your innocent little toy,
you played with me with little regret but more joy,
i have one question before we depart,
can a heart still be broken when its already apart?

© 2008 lexiilunatic


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Amazing Lexii. The last line really hits deep on your emotions, and I can sadly say I've felt like that before. It gets better, maybe not quickly but it does. I really loved this and I think you have a great talent :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


The last line had me. You packed so much emotion into so few words, I had to read some more than once.
"you made me into your innocent little toy,
you played with me with little regret but more joy, "
This truly reminds me of all the things I regret. Using people, who I didn't truly love. But it's the other way around for you. There really isn't much to say besides, great read, and keep writin.

Please do send me requests to your work. I will always try to read em!

Austin D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Hello there. My name is lexii. You can call me lexii lunatic. Im 15 years old, and i have many talents. One of them i think is writing. But thats my personal opinion. I am not a normal person i must .. more..

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