A deep and sorrowful story is hidden within your piece. One that makes us feel empathy towards the subject of restless torment. A subject who wishes just to not feel, because not feeling is better than this.
I felt a connection to this, due to my own pseudo-insomnia. Lying awake in bed at night because sitting up watching un-intriguing TV and playing the same repetitive games are dull and pointless, while writing is hard to manage when demons whisper in your ear. Very good poem and a wonderful read. Thank you.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the review. My insomnia actually grew stronger with age. I, now, hardly ever s.. read moreThank you so much for the review. My insomnia actually grew stronger with age. I, now, hardly ever sleep during the night and before it was terrible. I used to get home at around 4 am to be AT work at 6 am. Also this piece addresses a lot of different things that have happened my life, so I'm glad my words were able to make you feel something. Thank you.
A deep and sorrowful story is hidden within your piece. One that makes us feel empathy towards the subject of restless torment. A subject who wishes just to not feel, because not feeling is better than this.
I felt a connection to this, due to my own pseudo-insomnia. Lying awake in bed at night because sitting up watching un-intriguing TV and playing the same repetitive games are dull and pointless, while writing is hard to manage when demons whisper in your ear. Very good poem and a wonderful read. Thank you.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the review. My insomnia actually grew stronger with age. I, now, hardly ever s.. read moreThank you so much for the review. My insomnia actually grew stronger with age. I, now, hardly ever sleep during the night and before it was terrible. I used to get home at around 4 am to be AT work at 6 am. Also this piece addresses a lot of different things that have happened my life, so I'm glad my words were able to make you feel something. Thank you.