I'm Waiting

I am screaming silent cries from my soul.

my heart is bleeding,

but my fingers are numb

so i have no way to sew it up.

I wait for someone to help me,

for some reason that someone never comes.

I'm left alone.

Sitting and waiting

Alone.

Sitting and waiting.

Listening to the clock of infinite time; tick tock, tick tock.

Never ending pain

Surging through my veins,

Never getting better.

Never letting me forget.

Will I ever find peace?

Will i ever find release?

From this pain.

From this pain.

I sit, yet again, waiting...

Still, to no surprise

No one comes.

So I will

I will continue to sit here..

Alone,

Waiting,

Like a child with no name.

A person without meaning.

Waitng.

Will you come find me?

Reviews

[Dev]

Really good flow.. almost like lyrics.. Good write !!

[Raven Wilson]

The flow is great here, and the image of trying to sew up a bleeding heart with numb fingers somehow seems perfect.

[Frantzuu]

awesomeee

[Ruth]

I like the strucutre to htis - very moving xx

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i'm still waiting as well.... its amazing how you have the ability to write what i am feeling