Beautiful Dark Angel

She sits there.

Crying.

Her ice blue eyes sparkling off the light.

Her wings safely tucked to her sides.

She hears shouting.

Quickly gets up and goes to her window.

Outside the stars are smiling brightly.

Her door slams open

And she jumps.

Her wings.

A most beautiful blue.

If you look at her quickly, you think.

How wonderful.

How beautiful.

She’s an angel.

Though,

If you look closely.

You see.

The tears.

The holes.

The cuts.

The blood.

If you look hard enough,

You can see her broken soul in her eyes.

For those who will listen.

She has a story to tell.

Of how she became a dark angel.

The story.

It’s the saddest of all.

Once so perfect.

Tortured into what she is.

She lives by fear.

Never straying too far away.

Wanting to break free.

 From the curse that has been forced upon her.

Always alone.

Misunderstood.

Not wanted.

The dark angel flies tonight.

Reviews

[Justin]

beautiful piece of art thank u for sharing

[Blue tailed kite]

Wonderful poem.. I loved the way the poem took a sudden turn towards the dark and I agree with Katseye :)

[Katseye]

Beautiful write. Just remember she still lives so can yet be redeemed.

[Ruth]

This is wonderfully expressed:)
The breakdown of the soul, the eyes tell a lot!
Excellent work! xx

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Okay, so let me get this straight. You just started writing? That was amazing my dear! You didn't have any grammar mistakes that I can see. You captivated me with your word choice and how you strung the words together. You used everything to your will. I absolutely loved it. I can't think of a single thing to notice you of error. I can't tell you that this wasn't a poem, because it was, and I can't imagine this as a story, it would simply be too short.

You did great.
Rain

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

OMG. This is one beautiful poem. The emotions are just so vivid.
I love the story. Its sad, but written in a wonderful way. I like the
points of view you chose in your lines. It's nice how you zoom in on
certain details but never lost the big picture.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Beautiful writing i loved it. What grabbed my attention was the name since that is one of my nicknames

[DarkLovingRaven]

This is beyond wonderful. This is spectacular. I havn't seen something like this in a while.

[Nathan Durham]

This was really deep. I liked how it expressed such powerful emotions.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was emotional. I really liked it. I feel misunderstood all the time. Most of the time I am. It is probably because people don't get my depression and bi-polar disorder. I think it will be all better in life later. Thanks for sharing. :)