Suffering

still searching for the light.

despearate to end my life.

because of this vicious plight.

i feel of the metal knife.

tired of this endless fight.

my body cold as ice.

in the darkness of the night.

i will never have to relive this hideous strife.

the blurring of my sight.

words of a meaningless life.

all pain ends tonight.

Reviews

[TheAdventOf]

Dark! I dig it though, very cool, and the flow is done very well, especially for the constrictions of a rhymed poem. I've said it to a few other writers, but I beat depression without the help of anyone or anything, so the poem really hit hard for me as well. Just keep on keepin' on, and do what you do, it's fantastic!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. I could relate. I want my pain to end too. I don't know if it ever will though. Great write. The words flow really well. Thanks for sharing. :)