The Storm Of Love

everytime i see the
rain fall down
i think of you
a reminder of the tears that poured
on your silent shoulder
the pitter patter was the melody
to our love
getting caught
without a care
a storm int he distance
let's step outside
the thunder sounds around me
i'm scared but you're close
i'm wet but your lips are warm against mine
lightning brightens your face
for a split second
i can look into your eyes
and fall in love once more
the sunshine
came too soon
the rain falls differently this time
i walk but when i reach out
your hand is not in mine
i can't feel you next to me
the rain is colder and it comes faster
mixing with my tears
carrying them away
these drops don't sound the same
they sound like
pain, and the suffering of loss
instead of
hope, trust, and the exhilaration
of getting lost in
the storm of love
 

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[sara!]

katie. i think this is one of my favorites. maybe because it mentions rain, it flows nicely, or that the words written are amazingly set. i can just imagine everything happening in this poem. and the thing is, i was thinking about something like your poem earlier today. so thanks again for making me feel happy :)