Feel Alive

Feel Alive

A Poem by -!katie!-

You're not enough.

Try Try Try

To be worth it

To be proud

To feel accomplished

Fail Fail Fail

To feel alive

 

And when you wake up and realize you're enough.
You're enough, to stop trying.
Wake up, you are enough to be loved.
You feel alive.

 

Someone to tell you

Something to show you

Can you feel it?

No pity

No sympathy

No lies

Just the truth in three little words

To let you know they care.

To make you comprehend how wonderful you are. 

 

And when you wake up and realize you're enough.
You're enough, to stop trying.
Wake up, you are enough to be loved.
You feel alive.

 

When you feel it, you believe it.

You tell them you're wrong, but when you understand, you know it for yourself.

Feeling alive is the hardest part,

When you've been falling down from the start.

 

And when you wake up and realize you're enough.
You're enough, to stop trying.
Wake up, you are enough to be loved.
You feel alive.

You feel alive.

You will feel alive.

© 2008 -!katie!-


Author's Note

-!katie!-
opinions please. i don't think it's the best of my work. but i really think the chorus is good, that part is the part that just kinda came to me.

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:) aww that was cool! i like how you made it into a song. it has a deep meaning for when in your life you finally realize after all the hurting it's going to be ok even for a little while.
glad to see you're growing up like life intended for you to be :D
wonderful job, very interesting piece. i have to start reading your stuff again ^--^

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I'm katie, and that's basically all I am and will be. I am completely myself. I'm opinionated and different and I won't change that for anybody. My past isn't amazing, but hey, everybody has it better.. more..

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