Lucky

Practicing with emotion and rhyme :]

Lucky,

The boy I love,

from above,

shares how I feel,

and this is real.

 

Lucky

He make's me feel so free.

My heart, he's got the only key.

Standing there next to me,

He's the only one I see.

 

Lucky

to have the stars align,

feeling fine,

our fingers entwine,

and feel his hand in mine.

 

Lucky

Fate I have befriended,

this hasn't ended.

My heart has mended,

with his love lended.

 

Lucky

His arms, so strong,

have been holding me this long.

He makes everything wrong,

sound like a happy song.

 

Lucky

It's me he's kissing,

I'm not missing.

No more reminiscing.

 

Lucky,

The boy I love,

from above,

shares how I feel,

and this is real.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[sara!]

Really nice...flow was very good, even when u were expressing so much emotion...luved it...it reminds me of u know who

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Great work, your flow and rhyme are terrific as you express how love should make you feel.

[Samuel Dickens]

Isn't love great? Your happy love song makes me happy, too, Katie. May you feel loved always. Sam