I'm just here and you're just there

I'm just here

and you're just there

and I'd do anything for you to be near

 

You would kiss me on the head

as we lay in bed

we'd see all our dreams come true in the shadows

remembering our friends, forgetting our foes

we'd stay so close

we're perfect, and everybody knows

intensity hovers

above us, just two lovers

on your shoulder I'd lean

It woud be like a movie scene

 

And I'm just here

and you're just there

and I'd do anything for you to be near

 

You'd hold me tight

and we'd both be feeling alright

it could last all night

what a sight

 

And you'd keep me warm

through the storm

and we'd kiss in the rain

forgetting our pain

Your arms would be around me

by the crashing sea

 

But you're not here

and I'm not there

and there's nothing I can do for you to be near

Reviews

[LostCauze[:P]]

I love the flow of the poem and the sincerity of the words. Very sweet and cute at the same time. The ending was perfect and shook me. Keep writing.

[[untitled]]

This has a very sweet feeling of longing. You are developing a fine music within it. Katie say it out-loud to yourself to develop further the music contained within. This is very nice.

[lilain]

The poem is almost musical. I can certainly hear the sounds of a woman's voice bellowing out the lyrics.

Nice job and thanks for sharing this!

Best,
lilain

[Shane]

good poem babe=)..keep it up

[sara!]

adorable

[Sarah]

What a cute poem. o= The entire thing was so adorable that I forgot by the end you weren't ACTUALLY with this person. xD I've kinda always wanted to write something like this~ Happy and whatnot. x) Unfortuntely, I simply fail and so when I read something lovely like this, it makes me happy. Great job, I'm glad I read this!!!