Daddy, Your Little Girl

Daddy, Your Little Girl

A Poem by -!katie!-
"

uhm.. yeah.. take from it what you want.

"

I know you didn't mean to make me this way

unable to trust,

not willing to feel.

I know that you're better now,

and now you'd never hurt me,

but I was so young.

You left me,

with no understanding,

no idea of your wrong doing

but I'm older now

and I know what you did

You threw me, and us, away.

For her.

For anger.

Now I long for closure

I want to know that not every guy will leave me

like you did.

I don't know if I'll ever believe that.

It's so hard,

I'm so scared to be abandoned once more.

How will I ever let anyone in my heart?

When even you, shoved me out.

I know you love me,

and I love you too,

but I just don't understand how you could do this to me,

Your little girl.

 

© 2008 -!katie!-


Author's Note

-!katie!-
uhm.. opinions?

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Very well written..we all have family problems, trust me..superb

Posted 16 Years Ago


The deepest pain is what you speak of---Daddy connections broken....I especially like you shortest lines:
"You left me......for her....for anger" That you wrote it speaking to him - great choice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow. that's sad. but really good. i can feel your pain. nice work. =]

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I'm katie, and that's basically all I am and will be. I am completely myself. I'm opinionated and different and I won't change that for anybody. My past isn't amazing, but hey, everybody has it better.. more..

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