Just Be Here

random inspiration?

Just be here.

No, shhh.

Don't say anything.

Please, Just be here.

 

When, I'm falling apart.

Just stay.

That's all I need.

I need your presence.

I have to know you are there for me.

Just be here.

 

I don't need any profound words,

Telling me to look for a deeper meaning.

You are all I need.

I don't care what you say,

Don't say anything at all.

Please, stay silent.

Just be here.

 

If I cry,

and ask "why?"

Just hold me tighter,

And kiss my head.

You don't have to say a word.

Just be here.

 

Maybe I won't be okay.

But, having you around,

Will ease the pain.

Words can ruin anything.

Don't utter a sound.

Stay with me,

And that's all I need,

All you have to do,

To pick up the pieces.

Just be here.

Author's Note

again, all i ask is, opinions?

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Simply pure and sweet... sometimes al it takes when we love someone is just being there in the physical so they know they are not alone, love the way this was laid out and expressed.

[poetdweller]

this is amazing.. i love it... its how i feel a lot when I'm sad... its amazing...

[dawnmarie]

wonderful write !!!!!! it is amazing how saying nothing at all can speak louder then any words could

[Mariah]

I forgot,

AND THIS-

Maybe I won't be okay.

But, having you around,

Will ease the pain.

Words can ruin anything.

Don't utter a sound.

Stay with me,

And that's all I need,

All you have to do,

To pick up the pieces.

Just be here.

....... makes me cry.

[Mariah]

I don't need any profound words,

Telling me to look for a deeper meaning.

You are all I need.

I don't care what you say,

Don't say anything at all.

Please, stay silent.

Just be here.



-i don't know what this means to you, but it has completely reminded me how, such a s****y guy, made me feel okay, by just BEING there.
beautiful read.

[EVERYTHINGyoucantelltoS..]

Maybe I won't be okay.

But, having you around,

Will ease the pain.

Words can ruin anything.

Don't utter a sound.


the act of being can so often replace the acts of so many other things... the feeling of getting through it with the help from well, presence... everyone has been there... (lovely)

[Tessa Le Rouge]

those moments are when silence is necessary.
this poem is, simply put, amazing.
good job

[Veronica]

Amazing. Really relateable. This could really be a song (have you considered putting it to music?)

[Becca :)]

this is really good. sometimes all you need is silence. well done. =]

[Jeff Loquist]

I think you've said what many feel very often. Excellent.