Moving on

something to help people who like me, who like to dwell in the past. a lot.

We all have to move on some time.
We all have to learn to let go.
When we are hurt and let down,
We have to get past it,
But we never get over being broken.
We just learn how to deal with it
And put it behind us
Because life goes on and so do we.
We move along,
Make things better so the painful things can leave our minds.
It will never be okay.
The past does not change.
Nothing can be undone.
We won�t forget what has happened.
But we learn to face that, and move along.

Author's Note

again i ask, SUGGESTIONS? OPINIONS? please and thanksss

Reviews

[Sandra K]

Powerful and Moving! This is true in fact. Everyone has these feelings, and experience. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feeling.

Sandra K!

[Becca :)]

i really like this. its very positive and sends a good message. very nice!!

[Jillian]

this is really good kt. i think u should do something that is a little less used, i need to do that too! lol! but just use a different subject matter, something that not every1 uses.

[Mariah]

i dwell on the past also.
head uppp kidddo. :)

[Phil Sanders]

Welcome ... a nice emotive piece ...

[Dead Angel]

i love this!! very moving and has a good message to the reader. you should've kept going with this just a little further, add a little more to it. its good, but it can be great. well done!! :)

[Azizi- - !!]

I like it. My only suggestion is you make more writing. :] People these days are becoming more wordsy. But you just keep on doing your thing. Mkay?