The beautiful elegant...

The beautiful elegant...

A Chapter by Brody Lara

   The air was cold and still them moon shown with a pale shimmer showering the trees and glistened on that lake. Draven slammed his fist ona nearby tree making it tremble.

   "D****t!" He gritted his teeth, "I lost it again..."

  "Draven gazed at the glowing moon. The moon and air had a compelling mod to make Draven become more relaxed.

   Draven sighed "What am I going to do..." he leaned his forehead against the tree, "I want to kill at least one Cancer. I have to...or I' gonna lose my job."

   Draven knelted down to the floor to think about how close he was finally capturing a cancer. He stayed silent until a rustlying sound to him from across the pond. Thinking he might have fund the Cancer he was supposed to capture, Draven jumed across thepond and bolted behind the tree the noise cane from. To Draven's surprise, he found a girl about 16, around his age. She seemed to be sleeping peacefully. Her beautiful raven colored hair ended a few inches above her shoulder. Her hair was placed perfectly just enough to cover her right eye. Her elegant perfect skin was either as pale or paler than the moon. Her eyes were laced with black smokey make-up. The black lipstick on her lips made them glow. draven's impression of her was she was the most elegant, beautiful thing he ever imagined. All he could to is gaze at this gorgeous girl. After what felt like a few minutes, but could have been hours to Draven the girl began rustling around.  At that point Draven froze. He didn't know what to do. He kept telling himself to run, but his body remained still. There was this this strong compelling feeling that lured Draven to the girl. The girls eyes suddenly fluttered opened  to gaze striaght into his. Draven could have sworn his heart stopped for a second. Here eyes were paler than the moon yet bluer than the Caribbean Sea. It felt as though to Draven that these unusual pale-blue eyes were gazing into his soul, but for some reason it didn't scare him. It was actually warm and comfortable. Her eyes made him more relaxed then having a whole day at the spa. He couldn't help but smile. Her expression seem to read that she was at peace. Just as Draven was starting to cme out of the trance the pale girl put im in. She gasped and tensed back. She leaned closer to the tree semming as though she was trying to get further away from Draven.



© 2009 Brody Lara


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Brody Lara
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