The Inner Child

The Inner Child

A Poem by bri

Sometimes, I close my eyes

and see a little girl. 

So innocent and pure, 

helpless and clueless 

all at once. 


As I walk through this life, 

some days I hear her cry. 

Some days, I see her in pain - 

rejected, abandoned, scared. 

Those are the days I close my eyes 

a little extra. 


I bend down, softly on my knees,

look her in the eyes

and place my palm gently on her

round face.


I  tell her: 

everything will be okay. 

I tell her:

I’ve got you. I won’t let go.


Because as simple as it is

if only someone told that little girl right then

when she needed it most,

maybe  I wouldn’t have to close my eyes anymore.

© 2021 bri


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This poem I imagine would touch the soul of male and female alike in a similar situation. Nice poem and congrats on grabbing a reader by their feelings. It got my attention for sure.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bri

3 Years Ago

Yes, for sure. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words. :)
Azifwecare

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
There is within each of us a small child, maybe one who is suffering. It would be nice if all such children received the care described in this offering. Too often it doesn't happen.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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bri

3 Years Ago

Sometimes I imagine how insanely different the world would be if children received the nurturing lov.. read more
If only, if only. If only someone pointed us in the right direction at that moment in time we wouldn't have chosen that other path. This is the poem that leaves unanswered questions.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bri

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. :)
A heartfelt poem with nicely chosen words and the perfect title. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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bri

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
Clever and sweet words , very gentle and tender touch

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bri

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading. :)

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