His and Mine Too

his gold blonde hair
his stunning white grin
his deep caramel stare
his soft white skin

his gentle touch
his fresh scent
his musical laugh
he is heaven sent

his clapping hands
his dancing feet
his funny jokes
he's so sweet

his love for me
will not die
my love for him
is no lie

he found the key
to my heart
we're here together
we'll never be apart

 

Reviews

[Peteypie]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. its adorable

[ATG]

Yet again, one word. AAAAWWWWW!!!

This was a very sweet and touching poem. It was a good read.

[Stephanie]

Very sweet, short and to the point. I think it flows very well and whoever you wrote it for is close to your heart. You could even add more to it without it becoming too much. Fantastic :)

[AMetaphoricalSoul]

this is a great poem.
it seems to have some sort of underlying potential
you should try and see if you could expand on it
but overall good job

[Rebecca]

i really enjoyed reading this. it was so cute, and simple but at the same time very endearing. i can tell which ever guy you wrote this for is extremely special. Great job!

[Chaos Stone]

cute, sweet and adorable
i agree

[Ale Blevins]

very cute =] very nice imagery, good write --Amber-Leigh

[J.K. (Not Rowling)]

I really like the rhythm that you have on this one. You can't beat a love poem, especially one with a "deep caramel stare." Great imagery.

[Kiara]

this is so sweet and adorable : )
-arabella