incomplete.

i miss her...

the pain i feel from losing you

is far too much

to bear...

perhaps you will return to me

in days..

or weeks..

it isn't fair.

i want you now,

i need your touch,

without you life is hell.

please come back home

and break me free

from separation's spell.

you are not gone

forever,

but i feel as if

you are.

my heart is screaming

for you;

it is bleeding just to scar.

i need your smile,

your laugh,

your breath,

to make my small world whole.

for now without you

all i am

is a lost and lonely soul.

Author's Note

critique is welcome. :)

Reviews

[Noah]

Wow. I know exactly what this feels like. Well done.

[Angel's Lady]

Awww...the angst is palpable, and the want is tangible, almost like I can run my fingertips over the words and feel them, raised up on the page...Great job!

[Nick Reynolds]

I really like the emotion emanting from this poem. :) it's nice to see other young writers on here! :) Keep up the writing!!!
PS. Thanks for the review.

Nick

[Micah_s5]

Pretty good write, good flow.

[Rockebah]

I love this poem. I can clearly feel the love. A great write