spare me the detail

I've been with all the pretty faces,

Made them smile and took them places,

Faked the feelings, one night stands,

Held them close and held their hands.

Days into weeks, the pattern repeats, 

Lust on the breath, entwining in sheets,

A sultry smile, that haunting stare;

Got time to kill and emotion to spare.

Author's Note

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2012.
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Reviews

[luvs2write]

My first thought...where's the rest? =) This is a really good poem. I feel like it captures the feelings of someone who is "empty" and just wants to feel something. You kept up a really nice rhythm and rhyme. I like how the rhyming feels natural, in a lot of other poems it seems forced. This worked out very well though. You've got a great start, I wonder if you've ever thought of adding more to it? Either way, this is good. =) Keep writing...