Tiny steps

If living on top of the world wasnt so lonesome I'd be there all my days.
The hustle of souls will forever be a haze,
above the mountains and above the trees,
I feel them surrender and take to their knees
for the sky is their king and sea is their queen.

Reviews

[nostal]

Haze doesn't seem write. Yes, it rhymes, but the diction is a bit unappealing.

[isawyouinthewild]

What would you suggest.
This is what comes from my head,
I don't edit my free flowing thoughts much