one night

looking you up and down

its after midnight anything can happen now

listening to music and talking bout old times

but if only you knew what i was doing to you in my mind

your song comes on

you start licking yo lips and slowly moving yo hips

im past turned on

i think you can tell cause you get closer

now im hot as hell

trying to be good and strong

i know i cant keep this up for long

i was right im going to be bad

i want you tonight

i was stuck when them words slipped from my lips

wasnt stuck when we kissed

its getting hott n heavy

you sure you ready

clothes just flying

trying to get air feel lyke im diein

its happening now

i breathe out you breathe in

we moving as one

bodys giving out

we bout to c.....

BEEP..BEEP..BEEP..

good dream but damn we wasnt done...

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Very good. Had a style like Reese a little bit. How you wrote the word, "lyke." i can tell it was written from a male point of view, and very hot!! this passion/desires that is no longer far from bridled, you two just can't resist each other, and then........BAM! it's a dream. just a dream.

man, i've had those before flo.
i feel ya.

Kena

[Angel's Lady]

Oh snap. You definitely drew me in and I definitely wanted to finish with you...
Great write!
Heads up to Reeses for this read request. Thank you, ma'am.

[Reeses]

I'm sry dear Flo. I couldn't quite sit still as I read these sensual words. They eased their way thru my mind lyke they must have eased their way from your fingertips.

"looking you up and down
its after midnight anything can happen now" - great line, seems as if passion is ruled by the mydnyte atmosphere.
"i was right im going to be bad
i want you tonight
i was stuck when them words slipped from my lips
wasnt stuck when we kissed" - Great combo of words. Applause to you, Anonymous Flo. . .