3 angels

3 angels

the a first one had me

now she could do no wrong

when i looked at her it was only beauty i could see

i would swim to the bottom of any ocean for her

she was my world

 

3 angels

the second angel had the angel that had me

now in her eyes i could do no wrong you see

without her there would be no me

she filled me with joy from my head to my feet

every now and then i can hear her heart beat

 

3 angels

the thrid angel she kinda find me

which is funny cause she is two years younger then me

connected by blood, friendship, and love

she was my ace boon my ride or die

we got into trouble n out  or trouble daily

i always laughed at how she said hey to me

 

3 angels

the one who gave me life

the one who gave her life

the one who is my ace boon

my 3 angels

 who all left me way to soon

 

Reviews

[T]

Beautiful heartfelt sentiments for the 3 angels that impacted your life ... Wonderfully penned! hugs

[wizthom]

sad but true love blooms in ways that we may not always understand,
till love passes on,but rest asure there will be a fourth waiting to sing..
grandmother,mother ,sister,or lady friend just curious about the three angels.peace wizthom

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very softly written, it flows nicely the angels that touched your lifr is a sweet setimeint. Good write.

[Muddy B.]

this is sweet
the concept is unbarible
i love the way you desribed them(angels)
its sad its sweet at the same time
nicely written
keep up the
great writing!!!!!

[Dani California]

This is heartbreaking. :(

I like the way you set it up
the concept, the flow...

The last line is a heart sinker...
unexpected.

Well done!

[universalove]

this is sad. but its nice to read someones poem and it touchs you spirit. really good.

[Reeses]

Tear. a Flo of tearz have escaped my heart. Great read! ~Mydnyte Kyd~