ironic

ironic

A Poem by flo

ironic

you told me it was the last time when u had me

you pushed me away when u should have grabbed me

ironic

i wanted you so badly

was so mad that you didnt see

ironic

you pushed me out of your life

i left cause you didnt treat me right

ironic

now that the love that i had is no more

its me you want at your door

in your life

ironic

you want the ones that dont want you

and close the door on the faces that adore you

ironic

i love you

in love with you im not

ironic....

 

 

 

© 2008 flo


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what is love but a desire ,a need ,a want,
that best in times that are to be shared ,
u never miss your water till u are thirsty.peace wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great job here. Ironic. Yes indeed!

i love you
in love with you im not - Very aptly put.

Wonderful write!


Posted 16 Years Ago


This is awesome! Absolutely..
should be spoken word in my
humble opinion...

What you describe here is classic
relationship behavior.. challenge seems
to draw the interest of the other... oddly.
Real affection and love that is too easy
is often mistreated. Go figure. Ironic...

Outstanding! Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


thats the way the game goes . when he had it he didnt know what to do with it. until it was gone. his lost your pain. thats why the lessons are a blessing of life itself. i enjoyed the poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How ironic. The anonymous flo. . . leaves me speechless. . . ~Reeses~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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