fantasizing

i always dream beyond the galaxy

where i see that im always in your fantasies

i make all of your fantasies come true

noone are in them but me and you

fantasizing about you fantasizing about me

seems like the the only thing i do if im not with you

when im with you i try to live all the fantasies through

for we have only one life to live

only one heart to give

laying here dreaming and fantasizing about you

sleep and hope on my face saying

i want them to come true

till then i will be here fantasizing

about you..

Reviews

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without fantasy what would we be? from our ability to dream do we as individuals strive to capture these things that demand our focus. the drive to achieve our fantasies is what keeps a majority of us going and pushing. your poem touches on lovers and their want to reunite. a common theme but wonderful execution. great job!

[universalove]

this is really great. i do it all the time . it makes life better when your mind can be in two different places at the same time . but be with the one you want. thank you for the thought.

[Reeses]

Real good. I luv this right here. The anonymous Flo steals the show. we should collab sometime. This makes me think of fantasies and galaxies; big mountains, oceans, and trees. I luk 4ward to reading more of your work.