Tell me you love me

If I turned my skin inside out

Let all my guts spill on your floor

Heart pumping out my chest

Would you still find me pretty?

Could you clean the mess? 

Author's Note

love & appreciate any comments, thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful emotion and question. I like the visions and wants of the words. You open the door to vision and the need for more description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Horizons]

It's just a well defined a creative write which's filled with the questions... i loved how you expressed your ways to let everyone know about the your theme. I love how you just converted the words of poetry into the poem. Creatively penned write. Well, everyone'd love you if you've a nice heart who's filled with Mercy for everyone. That's all i got from the piece. Well done, Nicely penned!

[Briony Bryant]

Thank-you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Horizons]

Welcome! Btw, can i ask, is this a real write which's came from your life? mind if i ask?

[Briony Bryant]

Everything that I write is raw and inspired from very real emotions that I've experienced and felt. I'm not very good at expressing how I feel to others, so writing about it, is my outlet. Thanks again!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

THE TRANSITION OF THIS PIECE...THE BEAUTY OF IT ALL IS ON THE INSIDE...DOES NOT MATTER IF ITS UGLY OR PRETTY...MATTERS ONLY HOW YOU PERCEIVE THE PERSON IN YOUR LIFE...CLEANING THE MESS IS LIKE GROWING OLD WITH SOMEONE...GOING THE DISTANCE...

[Briony Bryant]

Thank-you for reading! I appreciate your comments!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...good to read your work...